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English Poems Thơ sáng tác trong tiếng Anh .

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Old 03-06-2006, 11:49 PM
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o_O

The times we spent together as the years past by
The memories we shared everytime we looked into the sky
Together day and night, it felt like we were already one
Underneath the stars and underneath the sun

Now your gone and I don't know wat to do
My life feels so incomplete when I'm without you
You're no longer with me when im lost in my thoughts
I dont even feel better with the junk that I bought

Others may not understand, but you never judge
You're always make me smile like a bowl of hott fudge
Now that I lost you, my heart feels this sting
No longer in my life, you are my ring
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Old 03-07-2006, 12:54 AM
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very nice, some of the things in there, i actually feel right now.
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Old 03-07-2006, 09:00 PM
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lol :P thanx..
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Old 03-08-2006, 11:56 AM
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some stuff in there...i think that while u making this poem, u cant come up with anything, so then u put things to make it rhyme...thats why theres that one line..about hot fudge ahha, cuZ the hot fudge got nothing to do wit the poem, or the main point of the poem...but i did like the first part to it
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Old 03-08-2006, 12:09 PM
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The times we spent together as the years past by
The memories we shared everytime we looked into the sky
Together day and night, it felt like we were already one
Underneath the stars and underneath the sun

Now your gone and I don't know wat to do
My life feels so incomplete when I'm without you
You're no longer with me when im lost in my thoughts
I dont even feel better with the junk that I bought
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Old 03-10-2006, 09:34 PM
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ummm.. i was eating this sundae w/ hott fudge while i was writing the poem... so i putt in judge to include my "fudge" haha :P but yahh... the point of the poem was to make readers misinterpret it until the end... the usage of the abstract item was suppose to make the readers get deep and then realize that all is nothing and nothing is all... i was trying to pass through a concept... but... haha.. ohhh welll o_O
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Old 03-20-2006, 10:13 AM
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ummm.. i was eating this sundae w/ hott fudge while i was writing the poem... so i putt in judge to include my "fudge" haha :P but yahh... the point of the poem was to make readers misinterpret it until the end... the usage of the abstract item was suppose to make the readers get deep and then realize that all is nothing and nothing is all... i was trying to pass through a concept... but... haha.. ohhh welll o_O

ok u lost me there hahaha
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Old 03-25-2006, 03:33 PM
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well... im a confusin person.. i guesss o_O haha :P
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